I REALLY REALLY like this. The whole concept of having a thought that is so perfect that you need to carry it out to completion is beautiful. And the way you're able to put that message into a poem this short is inspiring. I admire your work here and I hope you go far.
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I REALLY REALLY like this. The whole concept of having a thought that is so perfect that you need to carry it out to completion is beautiful. And the way you're able to put that message into a poem this short is inspiring. I admire your work here and I hope you go far.
Put yourself out there, you're brilliant.
-Eric